https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7F4nVf6RcK0&t=1s
Reflection from No. 2: Based on the feedback from my last pitch video, just enough info was provided to entice the audience and create a demand for my product.
What I changed: I revisited the comments from my previous video and decided it would be more engaging if I were to stand up, move around, and add some tone to my pitch to make it more appealing. In regard to the actual information presented in the pitch, nothing changed. I feel that I identified the problem, offered a solution, and ultimately got the point across in a short and informative pitch.
What I changed: I revisited the comments from my previous video and decided it would be more engaging if I were to stand up, move around, and add some tone to my pitch to make it more appealing. In regard to the actual information presented in the pitch, nothing changed. I feel that I identified the problem, offered a solution, and ultimately got the point across in a short and informative pitch.
Hi Michael,
ReplyDeleteI definitely think by you standing up and moving around it was much more interactive and engaging. Your voice is also much more projected which makes it a better watch/listen. The content in the video is also really succinct and informative.
Hey Michael,
ReplyDeleteI agree that when you stood up and moved around your pitch was interesting to watch and I felt engaged and enlightened. Some times no new information needs to be added, just changing the way you convey it makes a huge difference and I think you found your niche on how you convey your idea. It was more elaborate and seems different then your last video which is great!
Hi Mike,
ReplyDeleteI like how you took into consideration the audience watching and adapted your pitch for them. The addition of movement and a change of tone made your pitch much better in my opinion. In this pitch it was very clear and concise your problem and solution, which I appreciate.